A broken heart, a cloudy sky,
A lonely road, no one to say goodbye.
Little drops of rain, little drops of grain
When someone is in pain, there’s no one to claim.
Pearls from eyes, a life without dyes
Like a paper nibbled by mice.
Who cares what does this soul feel
When there’s no one to heal.
No hugs to pour
Only tears till core.
All because of trust
Broken by them was not must.
Bottles full of beautiful precious pearls
When hair are tangled with typical curls.
I don’t know why I still have this urge
When I know we can’t merge.
So full of feeling!
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Thank you.
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“Pearls from eyes, a life without dyes
Like a paper nibbled by mice.”You got me there.
That was really beautiful.Your poems are great and the best thing is that you focus on simple yet beautiful things.
I have a suggestion
What I found you stick to aabb rhyme scheme in most of your compositions which makes the poem monotonous especially for long ones.For long poems break it into stanzas and try out different rhyming schemes.
Keep Writing.😁
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Thank you so much for your compliment as well as your suggestion. I’ll surely work on it.
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Itni heart touching poems kaise likh leti ho aap ??. Mujhe bhi guide kro yaar .
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Wow Amazing. Fine sentiments presented so beautifully. Keep writing.
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Thank you
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Wow Amazing. Fine sentiments presented so beautifully. Keep writing.
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It’s really heart touching.
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